I wanna lie down
in the shadow of the sun,
And feel the breeze
all along the run.
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I wanna touch the blue sky
with my legs up high,
And see the clouds
coming down as I try.
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I wanna build a home for me
in the snow,
And stare at the snow flakes
rising up in a row.
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I wanna stand at the point
where the sky meets the sea,
And run towards the sea shore
feeling as free as I can be.
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I wanna fall from the uphill
waving the sky a goodbye,
And suddenly spring up the parachute
to land up a new life.
Very hopeful poem. Enjoyed it and you did get the rhymes right which made it amazing 🙂
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I’m glad you enjoyed the poem and the rhymes, they puzzle me a lot before setting up right. But yay! I made it. 🙂
Thank you, Anoop! 🙂
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A beautiful poetry dear! 🙂
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Thank you, Shambhavi! 🙂
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You’re welcome! 🙂
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I liked this piece especially because it was so positive and hopeful. Thank you for sharing, Archita.
-Naima
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Thank you so much, Naima! I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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OMG! really beautiful, this would be one of my favorites for sure 🙂
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Really, is it so good ?!? I didn’t thought it would come out like this. Thank you so much for that compliment, means a lot. 🙂
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You’re welcome, it did come out really good 🙂
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🙂
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May your imagination come true 😉
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Thank you so much, Bhanu! 😀
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gr8 !
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Thank you! 🙂
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What an imagination! After reading your poem I wanna witness it as well
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Thank you! I hope you do witness it soon. 🙂
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Great positive poetry 🙂 Nothing is impossible for our mind to imagine and dream 🙂
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Thank you, Darshith! True that. 🙂
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I felt like I could touch the clouds reading this poem! Love your optimism!
By the way, I’ve nominated you for an award. Click here for more!! 😀 https://kaleidoscopickites.wordpress.com/2015/07/13/my-sisterhood-of-the-bloggers-award/
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Thank you so much, Kalel ! I’m glad you could feel like that. 🙂
And thank you again for the beautiful award. 😀
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Your welcome! ;D
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Many thanks for this article. I’d personally also like to talk about the fact that it can end up being hard when you are in school and starting out to create a long credit ranking. There are many learners who are just simply trying to make it and have long or good credit history can oclioasnacly be a difficult element to have.
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Reblogged this on jamesmcraig and commented:
Poetry so refreshing I had to share it.
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Thank you so much, James! I’m all smiles reading your comment. 🙂 🙂
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That is so good!
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Thank you ! 🙂
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The hopes of betterment! lovely one.. 🙂
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Thank you.! 🙂
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Lovely poem. 🙂 Missed your writing whilst I was away.
Think there’s a few new ones on my site since you last viewed it. Hope you like some of them.
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