When I see you walking away to never turn back,
My eyes go wet and yours are no dry.
Its raining and I cannot see your tears,
So, its still okay.!
When I see you fall and get up back,
I wanna hold you and you wish I was by your side.
Its late and you wanna be strong,
So, its still okay..!
When I try to forget you but memories keep coming back,
I wanna run to you and you wanna wait for me too.
Its dark and you are at a better place,
So, its still okay…!
(This small poem is a challenge completed by me which was given to me by Prakash. Do checkout this #itsstillokay challenge on his page.)
This is so beautifully done. #ItsStillOkay was perfectly captured at the end of every paragraph! Loved this one.
Again, thank you for doing this! 🙂
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I am glad and a bit relaxed too that you liked it as I have written something after a long time. 🙂
I’ll always try to accept your challenges.:)
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I get that. I was away from blog for a while as well and its been periodic now. I am really happy to hear that.
Your poem was sure a pleasure read.. 🙂
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Thank you for a start-up boost.! 🙂
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Really touching. .
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Thank you
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Its beautifully completed… Absolutely love the opening para of the poem.
Good to see you back Archita.
And I have not forgotten the MMC too…hope you’ll join back 😉
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Thankyou soo much Hargun and good to see you too. 🙂 🙂
Yeah, waiting for the monday! 🙂
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Reynolds ! Nice
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Hahaha…thanks.
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This is PERFECT 🙂 The ending in every paragraph is great and then the added image with hand written words ❤
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Thank you so much, Darshith! I’m so very glad you liked it 🙂
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Welcome Girl 🙂
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This is so good, no longer its still okay (get it 😉 )
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Lovely handwriting!
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Thank you.!
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