Take this fair form of mine
Give me that dusky hue divine
So that I can blend with this night’s mystery
For all I want is my beloved’s company.
My honour tugs at my feet
While desire pulls at my arms
To venture out and go meet
Him and be captive to his charms.
I really don’t know which way to go
Wish someone could tell me and take me in tow.
And oh! You wretched moon
Why did you have to remove the silken shrouds
You have revealed my colour as I swoon
While you smile, gaping bright through the clouds.
Hope you too go through tough times
For making a plaything of these climes
I have lost something but gained a lot
I have got something but now I am in a spot.
Where are you taking me, my heart
After shaking my world apart ?
Gr8!!
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🙂
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Just lovely!
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Thank you, Anna! 🙂
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“Thoda jor ka jhatka lagta he, jab woh jhatka dil de jata he; Lekin jhatkon ke bina adhoori reh jaati he, yeh zindagi.” Couldn’t convey this better in english, so hindi it is 😀 Beautifully written!
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I couldn’t get a better comment than that. You write beautiful lines in hindi as well. And thank you so much, Roopesh! 🙂
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You’re welcome! and thanks a lot, its a big confidence raiser for me 🙂
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I’m glad if I could raise even a bit of your confidence. 🙂
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big raise, not a bit 😀
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🙂
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Just wonderful. It couldn’t get any better. I thoroughly enjoy reading your poems 🙂
Cheers!
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Thank you so much, Anoop! I’m so happy to read that you enjoy them. 🙂
Cheers.! 🙂
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Reblogged this on Books and More.
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🙂
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I could feel bit of humor in the poem. ‘The kind where you smile and cry together. Dont know why. Nice one.. 🙂
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I’m glad my poem could do that to you. Thank you. 🙂
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Hwy,I have nominated you for liebester award check it here
https://negativethinkerr.wordpress.com/2015/05/29/liebster-award-2/
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Thank you so much for that! 🙂
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its my pleasure!!
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It’s high time he should show up, i can feel your emotions 🙂
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Thank you for those words! 🙂
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Hey Archita..lovely poem..and the moon has to come in a romantic poem..hope to cross each other again and again..
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Thank you so much, Soumi! I am glad you liked it. 🙂
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Beautiful poem. As somebody who is also still searching, still hoping, it spoke to me. Hope you find him someday. 🙂
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Thank you so much for the wishes. I pray your hope too fulfils soon. 🙂
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