This dewy night,
This ethereal ambience,
There a mighty moon bright,
Dazzles with its magnificence.
♥
Why is the moonlight now quiet
After lighting up this fire?
The mixed signals of the weather
Have put our night into a quagmire.
♥
A sapphire blue sky, a dainty breeze,
These moist buds as if comatose,
In these setting of idyllic ease,
And fervent, free flowing prose.
♥
Why is this heart losing patience,
Why am I not in a state of bliss,
Why this life seeks cadence,
As if there was something amiss.
♥
My heart seeks that impossible dream
That I couldn’t find in broad daylight.
Or maybe I search for my lost sheen
In the dazzle of this night.
♥
Is there no one who remembers me
Even if by some stroke of chance,
He who would smile devastatingly
And instantly put me in a trance.
Very well written Archita. Enjoyed this poem 🙂 Night is special, always.
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Thank you, Anoop! I’m glad you enjoyed it.:)
Yes, it is indeed.
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Beautifully penned 🙂
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Thank you, Kritika! 🙂
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Beautifully written! Daring the impossible dream, and losing our state of bliss in turn, does make us feel alive. And in a broad daylight, there may be too many things which could sparkle but the one which stays even after when night casts its shadow, that’s our dream, that’s our impossible dream 🙂
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Thank you so much, Roopesh! 🙂 I’m glad you could connect and what a beautiful insight you’ve given to this poem. That is exactly what I wanted to convey.
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You’re welcome 🙂
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The night is described very well. The feeling of missing is well equipped with all the necessary pre-conditions. The poem is just so right! Neatly done! 🙂
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Thank you so much, Prakash! I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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Loved it! Beautifully written!
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Thank you! 🙂
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This is absolutely stunning! Archita, great work. Loved the expression, vocabulary and rhythm. It is magical! ❤
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Thank you so much, Akanksha! I’m glad you liked it. 🙂
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This is really beautiful. Thank you for sharing! 🙂
~Carl~
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Thank you so much. My pleasure! 🙂
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Hey! Your words are worth this and much more praise, please accept this and don’t forget to share: To share what I get — The Liebster Award –https://writingstoheaven.wordpress.com/2015/05/22/the-leibster-award/
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Thank you so much, Shashank for the award and such appreciation too. I am delighted! I accept it happily 🙂
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I have also written a post some months back with the same related title
https://darshith0000.wordpress.com/2015/02/09/stormy-night/
But,the content is all very different 😉
Yours was good and about love & longing for your partner and his acceptance. Beautiful, chaotic nights are most of the nights 😀 stormy nights are a bit less 😛
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Yeah! I read that, they are different but yours is more than equally good.! And you got the message correctly! Thank you 🙂
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Yeah thank you commenting 🙂 Welcome !!
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…And this poem of yours can put the readers in a trance. Beautifully penned Archita. 🙂
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Thank you, Somali! Your comment made my day. 🙂
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Perfect rhythm. wonderfully penned:))
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Thank you, Upen! 🙂
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Where you at a beach when you wrote this or thinking about a beach?
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No..just thought about it.! 😛
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